Monday 28 June 2010

My Personal Hippies

I was on the road, lonely and alone
Pitiful were my days, my evenings forlorn.
A barren road lay stretched behind and ahead,
I wouldn’t even know the direction, but for my footprints on the sand.

The sun shone bright, always at high noon,
Never saw any clouds, or the stars and the moon.
I was destined to trudge the infinite path,
Was not to halt, rest or even catch my breath.

One morning, with the sun still at mid-day,
I said to myself, “I’d do something better, if I may”
I repeated the same at noon and then in the evening,
But nothing changed and my hopes were diminishing.

As darkness approached and I prepared to stop,
A shrill scream from the right gave me a jolt.
Turning in the direction of the sound,
I spotted a bunch of hippies with joy unbound.

They were eagerly calling to me by my name,
As if I were an artist courting popularity and fame.
Their excitement grew watching me approach,
The screams too went up a few notch.

They warmly welcomed me to the group,
Treating me to delectable food.
Despite the curiosity, the music all around helped me cheer,
And later in the night, they told me who they were.

This was my personal group of hippies I was told,
People who I had met on the path, in days of old.
As I got to know more and more,
I realized all this had happened before.

Whenever I was dejected and ready to quit,
They would pick me up and put me back on my feet.
There was more to it, this being only part of the rhyme,
I too was their hippy as they were mine.

I too sing for them and dance to tunes,
When they are stuck in their sand dunes.
When day breaks, the celebrations end and we move on,
And you find yourself on the road again, walking alone.

This morn too, the road remained the same and so did the sun,
But I was a different man after the night of frolic and fun.
Brisk was my walk and my stride long,
Joy in my heart and on my lips was my ‘Personal Hippy Song’.

- To Sajal and Satyan, on their Birthday

13 comments:

Tawar said...

Like!!

vindhya said...
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vindhya said...

love it! jaanwar.your best so far, if i may say so. :) the idea, the words,the entirety, as good as it can get...

Hrishikesh Ranjalkar said...

i wish i had a vuvuzela to greet this piece with..

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Anonymous said...

This is surely a piece of Art. . !

Truly Adorable...Quite Intriguing... :) !!

Shailesh said...
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Shailesh said...

Supera Like!!! Superb Mr. Bihani :P!!

IMT Ghaziabaad ka asar... Totally agree to vindi...

Mast likha hai... Maza aa gaya bhai... very touching, relevant and close to heart...

Ashtung said...

@Tawar: thanks

@Vindi:I think so too :)

@Hrishi: U r iritating enough without the vevezula

@Anon: thanks

@Serum:Glad it had the right effect

Anonymous said...

No contest. Your best so far! very well written, and if I may point out - they usually come out well if you mean them (in the context of our discussion on poetry and feelings).

Birthday wishes to the friends.

Anonymous said...

So, what happened to the 'go on a date with me..' poem on your blog?

Sajal Gothi said...

thnx man.....
This poem is absolutely awesome...it has such a bizarre feeling...i thought i was living a life in 70s...the words selection, the concept and the feeling in it is too good...

Sajal

Ashtung said...

@Pratyu: I feel so too, though a few others come close...
I agree that it looks better with feelings but still think it depends on your audience base, which was completely different in the two cases and the 'likers' of one didn't appreciate the other so much...

@Sajal: Most welcome bro... Apologies for being candid ;)

satyan said...

Dude thanks,

nice one

This poem is absolutely awesome...it has such a bizarre feeling...i thought i was living a life in 70s...the words selection, the concept and the feeling in it is too good..